Friday, 18 December 2020

summer haiku poem

hello there bloggers I am back This is my summer haiku poem and I think this is my 3rd or fourth activity for the summer learning journey. This summer learning journey is very fun and I like doing the activitys they are giving me because they are very fun. I made 3 of the summer poems and they are all in one slide The thing i found hard was to find the 5 silibles the 7 and then another 5. The thing I found hard was too find the words that had 5 silibles when i heard we were doing a haiku poem I already knew how to make one because my old student teacher taught us some different poems and she taught us this poem. So it was kinda easy for me. here is the slide with my three poems.Hope you like it.
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  1. Zana Yates-Walker18 December 2020 at 14:33

    Kia Ora Fossie,

    My name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey.

    I really enjoyed this activity as I love poetry and writing Haikus for my friends, I usually write a Haiku in their birthday cards!

    You introduced the activity and explained what a haiku is and how to make one very well and it is great to hear that you have some experience writing haikus so this must have been easy for you.

    I like that your haikus are all about summertime and summer festivities but unfortunately I am unable to see your third haiku, could you please double check that you had posted it.

    To step up your work you could add some pretty images to support your poem and to step it up even further you could record yourself reading them and post that as well.

    Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.

    Ngā mihi nui,
    Zana Yates

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  2. Anonymous18 December 2020 at 15:13

    Hi there fossie
    GREAT WORK on your haiku poem. I loved how you expained how fun it was doing it. Did you enjoy it?. keep up the good bloging and hard mahi!
    -Mapa

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  3. Anonymous18 December 2020 at 19:43

    Thank you zana you are actually my second commenter and i also want to thank you for reminding me about the third poem i am going to go and fix that up and maybe i will record me saying my poem. kind regards Fossie

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